notes from the writing center again
Master of Disaster Medicine & Management.
2010 Haiti earthquake disaster
Could you please take a look for all the notes that he gave me and try to fix them all as much as you can.
Also I think he give only first pages mistakes. Please try to check everything as APA 6th REQUIREMENTS because DR very harsh with grading and I need high score to be in the safe side.
This is the writing center reply :
Good draft !
Most of the feedback on your attached draft discuss tense shifting, clarification, and syntax. Iâ€™m not sure if youâ€™re using the literary present or if youâ€™re shifting, since your verb tenses are often inconsistent. Some of the sentences noted below seem incomplete or have confusing/ misplaced modifiers, thus the meaning is obscured. Good luck with the rest of your revision.
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